Blog Entry # 4.20 - Human Ingenuity Evaluation (E)

Who might boycott your cereal box or be offended by it?Why?

I think that the people who would boycott this cereal is someone that hates French people for some kind of reason relating to the past. It can also be people who don't like Renoir or think that he wasn't the best painter during the impressionist movement.

Who might buy every box of your cereal box?Why?

I think that the people who would buy every box of Renoir cereal would be little kids because I made it just for them due to the reason that it is childish looking cereal box. People who are a big fan of Renoir paintings would buy every cereal box or any French people who know about his history.

Blog Entry #4.19 - Design Evaluation (E)

Which panel of your cereal box needs the most improvement? What changes would improve your panel?

The panel that needs more improvements is the top side of the cereal box because I wanted to add another picture which was a painting of Renoir when he was old. Another change I would make is a catchy slogan because I want to grab my audience attention in order to make them buy the cereal. I also wanted my slogan to make my audience laugh but have information that made him so important in French and the United States.

Blog Entry #4.18 - Completed Top and Bottom (D)

Blog Entry #4.17 - Completed Sides (D)

Blog Entry #4.16 - Completed Back (D)

Blog Entry #4.15 - Process (E)

What exact items have been added to your cereal box?

The exact items that has been added to my cereal box is the criss cross puzzle and the title of the puzzle too. I also have the background color of the cereal box.

What exact items still need to be added to your cereal box back next week?

The exact items that still needs to be added to my cereal box back are the extracted pictures and the front color.

Evaluate your classwork based on Criteria F - Attitudes in Technology. What score would you give yourself? What can you do to improve your score?

I would give myself a 6 out of 6 because I completed my back cereal box with the two things that he needed which was the puzzle and the background color. I can try to add some changes such as the color front and try to extract image for my back cereal box.

Blog Entry #4.14 - Progress (D)

Blog Entry #4.13 - Completed Front (D)

Blog Entry # 4.12 - Process (E)

What exact items have been added to your cereal box front?

The exact items added in my cereal box front is the picture of my person, Auguste Renoir, and the picture of my cereal which is corn flakes. I also have the background color which is blue.

What exact items still need to be added to your cereal box front next week?

The exact items that still needs to be added in my cereal box front next week is the title of the cereal and slogan. It is also missing the company name.

Evaluate your classwork based on Criteria F - Attitudes in Technology. What score would you give yourself? What can you do to improve your score?

I would give myself a 5 out of 6 because I extracted my noble person, Auguste Renoir, and my cereal. I posted what I done in my front box to blog entry 4.11 progress (D) which was a background color and my two extracted pictures. I can improve my score by getting a new computer because the computer freezes and I need to use my time wisely so I can make my cereal box cover beautiful and add in the title, slogan and company name to the front box next week.

Blog Entry # 4.11 - Progress (D)

Blog Entry # 4.10 - Slogan (B)

1. Beauty is in painting when we are with Renoir
2. leading painter that can not be ignore
3. Join the impressionism movement with Renoir
4. imagine and create beauty in the impressionism movement
5. Renoir lead his painting with the treat of frosted flakes

Which of the slogans is the best and why?

The best slogan is number 5 "Renoir lead his painting with the treat of frosted flakes" because it has my notable person name which is Renoir and what he love to do which is painting. It also have the cereal name that can make a great cereal because it describe who Renoir was.

Blog Entry # 4.9 - Cereal Names (B)

1. Renoir Puffs Painter
2. Impressionist Frosted Painter
3. Art Krispies
4. Auguste Pops
5. Painting Cheer Renoir style

Which of the cereal names is the best and why?

The best cereal name is number two which reads "Impressionist frosted painter" because it includes what Auguste love to do which is paint and he was the leading painter for the impressionist movement they had in French. This cereal name is sort of funny and catchy to remember.

Blog Entry # 4.8 - Target Consumer (B)

The consumer my cereal box will attract are children because I want them to learn about Auguste Renoir and his achievements. I will include a crossword puzzle where they will learn who Auguste Renoir was and what he did in his life. I would also have a funny or creative cereal box title that kids would like to buy. The last thing I would add on my box in order to grab my audience attention which are children is by adding colors and a picture of a good cereal that have Auguste Renoir right next to the cereal.

Blog Entry # 4.7 - Image Research (A)

Blog Entry # 4.6 - Person Research (A)

1. Name of Notable Person: Auguste Pierre Renoir

2. Web Addresses of all Sources (copy and paste)

http://www.renoirgallery.com/biography.asp
http://www.dailyartfixx.com/2011/02/25/pierre-auguste-renoir-1841-1919-2/
http://www.notablebiographies.com/Pu-Ro/Renoir-Pierre-Auguste.html#ixzz1HWUVLy
http://www.mootnotes.com/art/renoir/renoir-timeline.html
http://thinkexist.com/quotes/pierre-auguste_renoir/

http://www.pierre-auguste-renoir.org/

3. Biographical Information

a. Date of Birth and Death

Born on February 25, 1841 and died on December 3, 1919

b. Place of Birth and Death (or current residence):

His place of birth was in Limoges, France and he died in Cagnes- sur-Mer, France

c. Family (e.g. parents, siblings, spouse, children)

In 1890, Renoir married Aline Victorine Charigot and he had a child from her named Pierre. Auguste have six siblings and his parents name is Léonard Renoir and Marguerite Merlet
d. Education
He study painting by entering the studio of Charles Gleyre. Auguste visited the louvre to study the early french painters such as the eighteenth century—Antoine Watteau, Francois Boucher, and Jean Honoré Fragonard.

e. Occupation

He became an apprentice in a porcelain factory and work with his older brother.

4. Two-three Quotes (either about the person of from the person)

“The pain passes, but the beauty remains.”

“Shall I tell you what I think are the two qualities of a work of art? First, it must be the indescribable, and second, it must be inimitable.”

“The work of art must seize upon you, wrap you up in itself and carry you away. It is the means by which the artist conveys his passion."

5. Significant contribution(s) to World History

He was the leading painter in the development of the impressionist movement and his artwork was known to the whole world. Augste was known for his style of painting and he painted a lot of women.

6. Ten terms related to the person

Procliean factory

leading painter

Pierre

Charles Gleyre

Limoges

Cagnes

dedicated

Impressionist movement

art

Aline Victorine Charigot

7. Timeline of at least five important dates in the person’s life
1841- He was born in limoges and work in the procliean factory
1862- At the age of 21 he study painting with Charles Gleyre
1864- At the age of 23, Paris salon exhibit Renoir work but Renoir suffer a lot of hard times in this year

1871- At the age of 30, members of the Paris Commune almost murder Renoir when he was painting because they thought he was a spy

1874- At the age of 33, end his friendship with Jules Le Couer and started a new painting subject. Six painting of Renoir's are exhibited at the first Impressionist.
1881- At the age of 40, he travel to Spain, Algeria and Italy.

1883- At the age of 42, he spend his summer in Guernsey and finish fifteen paintings.

1885- At the age of 44, Renoir married Aline Victorine Charigot and had a son named Pierre.

1887- At the age of 46, Renoir donated several paintings to Queen Victoria as a token of his loyalty

1919- Renoir died on December 3rd in Cagnes. Before he died he visited the Louvre to see his paintings.

Blog Entry # 4.5 - Design Brief (A)

I am going to design and a make a cereal box about Auguste Renoir. The goal of this project is to target my consumer so they can learn everything about Auguste Renoir through each side of the cereal box. The people I'm targeting is the children because I would add cartoon and painting that describe Auguste Renoir and would capture the kids attention. I consider creativity to be an important element for this project because I want to grab the kids attention by showing the front cover in which would have a creative title that would make them laugh and a cereal in which they like as well as a puzzle game. The things that I don't want to do in my project is a boring cereal box with no games and a color that no one likes, like black or brown.

Blog Entry # 4.4 - Plan (C)

Steps for completed the cereal box project

1. The front of the cereal box (60 total minute) name, slogan, company name, and extracted photo
2. The back of the cereal box (60 total minute) information about the person and making a puzzle
3. Internet research ( 1 hour)
4. One side panel 1 ( 40 minute) quote of Auguste Renoir and the picture of his flag country
5. One side panel 2 ( 45 minute) about 10 important facts of Auguste Renoir life written as a time line
6. Bottom panel bibliography would take about ( 29 minute)

Blog Entry # 4.3 - Adult Cereal Box (A)

1. Describe all of the ways the designer has targeted adults with this cereal box.

Answer: The designer has targeted adults by giving nutrients facts such as fruit and yogurt. Special K also help you maintain a healthy diet and make you stay in shape. In the outside of the box, Special K show two kinds of fruits.

2. What gender of adult is targeted? What elements led you to this conclusion?

Answer: Women's are the gender that is begin targeted by Special K because woman love to be in shape ans they keep their body healthy. The color of the Special K cereal box is purple in which is a girl color and it represent strength and royalty.

3. What is the advertising slogan?

Answer: The advertising slogan for Special K is "Healthy"

Blog Entry # 4.2 - Children's Cereal Box (A)

1. Describe all of the ways the designer has targeted children with this cereal box.

Answer: The designer has targeted the children by adding a cartoon character which is a tiger and colors around the box. It also have 2 bags of cereal and a small clip of how the cereal looks like.

2. What gender of children is targeted? What elements led you to this conclusion?

Answer: The gender of children that the cereal box is targeting is boys because it has a strip tiger that is fit and tigers are very aggressive animal. The color and strip are one of the elements that made me believe that boys are the target consumer.

3. What is the advertising slogan?

Answer: The advertising slogan for frosted flakes that Tony the tiger always say is "They're

Gr-r-reat!"

Blog Entry # 4.1 - Design Task (A)

I am creating a cereal box about Auguste Renoir who was a painter in the development of the impressionist style. I have to add more details and facts about Auguste Renoir. Basically I have to make a creative cereal box that persuade my audience which are children to buy Auguste Renoir cereal and learn everything about him.

Blog Entry # 3.16 - Human Ingenuity Evaluation (E)

The type of tourist that would not like my poster are people who don't like to visit the attraction I listed in my poster or tourist that don't like India at all. The tourist could also not like the extraction I made because it does not attract their attention. The whole point of the project is to make people visit our country but there would be tourist that don't like to see India national flower because they want to see things that they can do when they stay in India.

Blog Entry # 3.15 - Create Evaluation (E)

On a scale of 1(lowest) to 6(highest), rate your Adobe skills.
I give myself a rating of 5 out 6

Why did you give yourself this rating?
I give myself this rating because my Adobe skills are okay but not excellent because I need to extract my picture well. However, my India poster had rotated picture and text as well as the captial city, currency, offical language and leader. I also had a front that everyone can read and colored my text.

How could you use the Adobe Illustrator in your other classes?
I could the Adobe illustrator for my social studies such as when I'm doing a DBQ project or in Art class when I start doing collages of drawings. I could also use Adobe for Technology and English when I'm doing a project for the color purple such as a character poster.

Blog Entry # 3.14 - Design Evaluation (E)

How could you improve your poster design?

I could improve my poster design by adding more text that can grab the people attention. I should also improve my extraction because I didn't extract my president, the gate way of India and the India hotel. Everything I extracted wasn't well done because it came out messy. I could also improve my background color because it show a lot of green and no other color.

Blog Entry # 3.13 - Completed Poster (D)

Blog Entry #3.12-Process Journal 3 (E)

What exact items have been added to your poster?

The exact items that have been added to my poster if the fact about captial city, country name, current leader, currency and official language. My poster also have the pictuer of India current leader, India money, map and flag.

What exact items still need to be added to your poster next week?

The exact items that still need to be added to my poster next week is 6 more picture in the design specification sheet which is the attraction/ monument, national flower, national bird, hotel and things that you can do while staying in India such as water rafting or visiting historic places.

Evaluate your classwork beased on Criteria F - Attitudes in Technology. What score would you give yourself? What can you do to improve your score?

I would give myself a 5 out of 6 because I was working on my poster instead of talking to people that would waste my time. I also got some of my work down but I could have done better if I extracted correctly by saving it to the right file. I also display a good amount of work and I consistently work on my project without stopping.

Blog Entry #3.11 - Progress (D)

Blog Entry #3.10 - Process Journal 2 (E)

What exact steps have you completed thus far?
The steps that I completed thus far is every thing in the design specification sheet such as pictures that shows attraction/monuments in Indai and the flag/map of India too. I also have the required text in blog entry#3.6 which was the country research. Another step that I completed was the extraction of my president, and the practice image provided in class.

In what ways could your work be improved?
One way my work can be improved is by practicing my extraction because I mess up with outlining or cutting my president. I could also try managing my time as well as getting a better computer so I can finish my work faster.

Evaluate your classwork based on Criteria F - Attitudes in Technology. What score would you give yourself? Support your score with specific examples. What can you do to improve your score?
Based on Criteria F - Attitudes in Technology, I would give myself a 5 out of 6 because I work very quietly today and I was not talking unless it was about the project. I also got all of my work done in class but I should work on my extraction. I can improve my score by having my computer set to Adobe and to my blog next week.

Blog Entry #3.9 - Image Extractions (D)

Blog Entry #3.8 - Target Consumer (B)

The tourist that my poster would try to attract are people who love food, and love to see beautiful sites that grabs their attention such as how the attraction/ monuments of India is so beautiful in the dark or the history behind these monuments. My poster would attract tourist that loves to have fun such as going water rafting or air balloon riding. The tourist would be people who loves to see the national bird of India spreads its wing. The poster would have the president and the national flower because my tourist would want to see the first woman that became president and see the beauty of the lotus flower. Basically I'm targeted people who love to explore all of these things and who is open minded to the world.

Blog Entry # 3.7 - Image Research (A)

Pratibha Patil

Hyatt Regency Location - Delhi

White water rafting

Hot Air Ballooning

Flower: Lotus

Peacock - India's National Bird

The Golden Temple

The Gatway of India

Akshardham Temple in New Delhi

Blog Entry #3.6 - Country Research (A)

1.Name of Country: India

2. Web Addresses of all Sources (copy and paste)
http://www.state.gov/r/pa/ei/bgn/3454.htm
http://www.trueknowledge.com/q/india_population
http://adaniel.tripod.com/Languages2.htm

http://coinmill.com/INR_calculator.html

3. Basic Facts

a. Capital City: New Delhi

b. Population: 1,198,003,000..

c. Monetary Unit/Currency: Indian Rupee

d. Official Language(s): Hindi

4. Current Leader

Name and Photo:





Pratibha Patil

5. Flag: India

6. Map of country:

Blog Entry #3.5 - Design Brief (A)

I am going to design and make a poster about India that would attract or grab the attention of my audience or to the people in general so they can go visit this country. The goal of this project is to grab my audience attention so they could go visit India. This poster should be able to have information as well as beautiful site about India. My target market 's demographics are teens, taste, views and lifestyle. What I considered to be an important element for a successful project is the amount of information you can write about the country as well as all of the design brief requirement and adding more information that makes this country exciting and special. The things not to do in this poster is incorrect spelling and grammar errors as well as information that do not interest the audience. The styles I would like to see in my design is picture, information and background color that could grab the audience attention for about 5 minutes so they can read and visit India.

Blog Entry #3.4 - Process Journal 1 (C)

The steps I need to complete for this poster project is

1. Try to research India 10 minutes
2. Find the capital and the person who is the leader of the country 3 minutes
3. Official language and currency 3 minutes
4. Find about 9 picture in total which would take about 10 minutes
5. Add more facts about more site, a place to stay in, and more attraction as well as information about the country 10 minutes

Blog Entry #3.3 - Poster Research (A)

This poster stood up the most to me than the other posters because I love animals and the sites as well as the color capture my attention. The type of tourist being targeted by this poster are people who love the beach and the animals that live under the sea. This poster show the kind of ocean and the amount of fun you can have in the Australia beach. The information that this poster give about Australia beach is it sea animals and the boat rides you can get so you can see Australia beach in a totally different way.

Blog Entry #3.2 - Dream Destination (A)

The country I would like to visit is Paris because the site and the place itself just grab my attention. I also love their language and it always been a dream of mine to go visit this country. Ever since I heard about Paris there was something about this country that made it different from the rest such as its beauty and attraction that make it elegant and fun to visit. another reason why I want to visit Paris because I want to see its art. When I'm in Paris I'm going to visit the Louvre so I can see its art, sculpture especially the Mona Lisa. I heard that her eyes follow you and I want to see if that is true and I want to go visit the Eiffel tower so I can go up their one night so I can see a better view of Paris.

Blog Entry #3.1 - Design Task (A)

The design task that we have to do for this poster project is to to make a poster about the country that would attract the people so they could go visit this country. The country I have been assigned is India and I'm going to put picture of India sites that would attract the people so they could go visit this country. I also have to add information about India that would convince the people to go visit this country and to see its beautiful site.

Blog Entry # 2.22 - Human Ingenuity (E)

The kind of people who might be offended by my greeting card is the people who are not the consumer or the people who have different perspective. The reason why they might be offended is by the people, saying or the picture.

Blog Entry#2.21-Greeting Card 3 Reject (B,D)

1. Describe the consumer targeted by this greeting card?

The consumer being targeted by this greeting card is teen.

2. Why is this design less appealing to the consumer than the other design?

This design is less appealing to the consumer than the other design because the saying doesn't connect with the picture that much.

3. How could this design be improved to better appeal to this consumer?

The design can be better improved by making a good saying that is fun and connected to teens.

Blog Entry#2.20-Greeting Card 3 (B,D)

1. Describe the consumer targeted by this greeting card?

The consumer that is being targeted by this greeting card is teens.

2. What elements of your card design are meant to appeal to this consumer? Explain

The element that is meant to appeal this consumer is the picture and the saying because the picture relate to the saying and to teens. It basically have a lot of teens looking at the firework and sitting in the park. The saying explain these activity

3. Compare this final design with the original sketch. What changes were made and why?

The changes made was the background color because I didn't want to leave it black because you can't see the text color that well which was yellow.

Blog Entry#2.19-Greeting Card 2 Reject (B,D)

1. Describe the consumer targeted by this greeting card?

The consumer being targeted by this greeting card is people who play sport.

2. Why is this design less appealing to

the consumer than the other design?

This design is less appealing to the consumer than the other design because the saying is not interesting for kids and it doesn't connect with the picture that much.

3. How could this design be improved to better appeal to this consumer?

The design can be better improved by making a good saying that is fun and connected to the picture or change the picture to something that relate to sport.

Blog Entry#2.18-Greeting Card 2 (B,D)

1. Describe the consumer targeted by this greeting card?

The consumer that is being targeted by this greeting card is people who play sport.

2. What elements of your card design are meant to appeal to this consumer? Explain

The element that is meant to appeal this consumer is the picture and the saying because the crown represent champion and the saying is basically saying that Queen Victoria and sport rock.

3. Compare this final design with the original sketch. What changes were made and why?

The changes made was the text color because I wanted the text color to be seen in the greeting card.

Blog Entry#2.17-Greeting Card 1 Reject (B,D)

1. Describe the consumer targeted by this greeting card?

The consumer being targeted by this greeting card is children.

2. Why is this design less appealing to the consumer than the other design?

This design is less appealing to the consumer than the other design because the saying is not interesting for kids and it doesn't connect with the picture that much.

3. How could this design be improved to better appeal to this consumer?

The design can be better improved by making a good saying that is fun and connected to the picture or change the picture.